Environmental problems are classified on different levels of importance by people. While the most profound concern of some people is endangered species, others argue that there are more crucial problems. In my opinion, every single issue that is threatening the planet ought to regarded as a significant one.
On the one hand, the extinction of species will bring about major consequences. Animals and plants rely on one each other through the food chain. Thus, loss or deficiency of any kind can undermine the balance of the ecosystems. Undoubtedly, an unbalanced nature would be problematic in unexpected ways. For instance, the loss of a predator animal in Australia has increased the number of rabbits, and the rabbits invade the farms frequently and ruin agricultural products, all the time.
As the earth is an integrated system, a disorder in any part could develop unpredictable malfunctions in other parts. Though the malfunctions might be felt promptly or in an extended time, their importance should be considered equal. For instance, the short term impact of global warming in large cities is air pollution. Air pollution almost makes many cities throughout the world inhabitable, and many dwellers are suffering from respiratory and other potential diseases. In comparison, the long term impact of global warming could be the rise in sea levels stemming from glaciers melting. Surprisingly, habitats of many endangered polar species will be devastated as a result of global warming.
In conclusion, the dependency of different parts of the system to each other is undeniable. Yet, it seems unreasonable to concentrate on addressing a single environmental issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...rn of some people is endangered species, others argue that there are more crucial...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38022813688 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07597277687 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627376425856 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6584067972 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4375 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153187213338 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457829716232 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455153159244 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096947567821 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588065501034 0.056905535591 103% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.