The modern era is known as the age of information and sharing data can play a vital role at this time. Although, some people believe that information should not be easy to access for every one, I would argue that, it is more efficient to allocate information openly for avoiding time wasting and going toward more developed glob.
On the one hand, some people argued that sharing information by paying money is a good way to have an international marketing. However, it the transferring data change to business, it would lose its value and cause some trouble with regard to cybercrime. As a result, some people misuse this feature and conceive others to gain a huge amount of money by exchanging the information, which is worthless.
On the other hand, nowadays, most of transferring information has been done through the internet. As a result, the majority of information can be accessible online for people freely all across the world. It would be helpful as this aspect that, educated individuals get familiar more easily with up-to-minute academic achievements. Therefore, they do not need to spend extra time for investigating the facts that the others have figured them out. Additionally, for many of current major problems that governments are facing with, such as environmental concerns, it would probably be an effective approach to solve them by creating contribution among scientists in the company of sharing their information and knowledge publicly.
In conclusion, however some people disagree with this idea that information should not be free for public, I strongly believe that sharing information could be timesaving as the time is wealth especially in the age of technology and the universe moves toward progress.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 191, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...rring data change to business, it would lost its value and cause some trouble with r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18505338078 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94136671472 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580071174377 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.025996073 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.454545455 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276977324092 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106399225509 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632130872741 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184283936614 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299213388181 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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