Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe some information is too important or valuable to be showed freely.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is sometimes thought that sharing information in different areas among the public can be helpful; however, others say that spreading data should be controlled and needs some limitations. In my opinion, I consider that having access to vital data for all people around the world without any obstacles will be more beneficial and profitable.
On the one hand, it is believed that giving almost all data about science, business, and academic studies to all experts and individuals who are interested in, generally helps societies develop and scientists innovate faster. In other words, the main reason for research is finding new ways to solve current issues in any field of science and technology, taking vaccination, for example. Suppose a group of researchers who have successfully found medical treatment for an epidemic disease such as covid-19 take their achievements secret and don’t let other countries access the results. Hence, in that case, a massive number of people will lose their lives.
On the other hand, freely sharing information and data in different research areas may not always be helpful, and even it can cause numerous problems. For instance, researchers spend plenty of time and energy on gathering and analyzing the data to make progress and promote the results. Therefore, releasing this valuable data without paying is not fair and financial supports should be provided to keep experiments running. Moreover, the government army in all different countries always tries to stay robust and hold their authority. So that, it is not possible for militaries to let enemies figure out how developed they are and which equipment is used for defending the country.
In conclusion, although distributing data in public sources can be a double-edged sword, I believe that people have the right to know and communicate about anything, whether important information or not. It would help people to make an easier life and experience fewer hardships.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30573248408 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78793235901 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617834394904 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2465958705 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.153846154 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8461538462 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20816221045 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651653982746 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055201449494 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125734675961 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339304372885 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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