Information plays a vital role in the modern world, and keeping it as a secret in some invaluable domains seems paramount important. However, clarifying helps all nations improve their life balance, as we will discuss both sides here.
On one hand, those who support the idea of not to share specific information point to paying special attention to their national factors. They believe that preserving their territory has a high priority when the developed military equipment will be used in a war. If the country shares its invaluable information, other countries will be able to imitate these high-tech facilities. Another reason is to being unique in the world to make a living. Inventing a novel medicine plant at the university, scientists are allowed to sell these facilities to other countries, resulting in enhancing their country’s economy. Therefore, preserving significant information may benefit not only the government but also dwellers as well.
By contrast, supporters of prevailing information often state that data is accumulated in the academic world, leading to expanding knowledge. To enhance the productivity of both our nation and other countries, it seems necessary to use the knowledge and experiences of others. Take the invention of a vaccine for a new virus as an example. Although scholars, who invented the vaccine, can produce and sell it to other countries, they are not able to use facilities and devices from other countries because each one isolates their own database. Moreover, mural duty is another cause of sharing information, especially in the fields related to human health.
In conclusion, it seems to me that it is not recommended to preserve information as a secret in the globe as we can hand down our information to ameliorate our life level. This is provided that most governments avoid taking part in wars which need military equipment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended preserving'.
Suggestion: recommended preserving
...nclusion, it seems to me that it is not recommended to preserve information as a secret in the globe as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25328947368 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97464287935 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611842105263 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5467708332 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.466666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206168023917 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610560011243 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356087386053 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113638009589 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038406930214 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.