Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discuss both views.
Some people argue that animals should not be kept in zoos, while others believe that zoos are of ecologically importance as well as entertaining. From my point of view, I am completely in favor of the idea that zoos exert more positive impacts upon the whole community than negative ones.
On the one hand, keeping animals in zoos still have some drawbacks. Firstly, zoos animals are kept in artificial environments which will make hunters lose the freedom to hunt for food. In fact, the best way to save endangered species is by protecting their natural habitats. Secondly, zoos are supposed to be unethical. To be more specific, many zoos exhibit animals with the aim of making money but we have no right to use them for entertainment or profit.
On the other hand, their benefits far outweigh their disadvantages for a variety of reasons. The preliminary cause leading to maintaining zoos is that they play a fundamental role in wildlife conservation as they help to protect endangered species from illegal hunters. From economic perspective, zoos provide job opportunities for a great number of local people , which in turn results in higher incomes and living standards. Last but by no means least, zoos are interesting, educational and fun. For instance, they make a great day out for families. Children, in particular, are more likely to learn to appreciate wildlife and nature.
In conclusion, although keeping animal in zoos can somehow have pernicious effects, I still support this way due to their profits bring to the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ities for a great number of local people , which in turn results in higher incomes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, as well as, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0431372549 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83806738201 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9472034379 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8571428571 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6428571429 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202928306065 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702174970284 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872495480707 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129134646637 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659580078109 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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