Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Some people who are vegetarians believe that eating no meat or fish exerts positive impacts upon not only their own health but also the world as a whole. From my point of view, I am strongly in disagreement with this viewpoint.
Firstly, eating solely meat or fish does not guarantee a healthy and nutritional diet for people who are at the growing-up ages. To be more specific, the menus of vegetarians lack vitamins and minerals. Since meat is the best source of B12, a vitamin necessary to the nervous and digestive system, vegetarians are more prone to B12 deficiency. Moreover, vegetarian meals can not meet the intake requirements of fat, a vital element which helps cushion organs and insulate the body.
Furthermore, consuming meat or fish does not have a great influence on the world. The obvious reason is that meat is the main ingredient for a plethora of traditional dishes in many countries worldwide. For instance, in order to make Chung Cakes, we should choose delicious meat. Besides, our aim should be to improve farming methods as well as urge farmers to produce organic food and only by killing animals can we put pressure to find out other useful ways.
In conclusion, I personally support the view of building a healthy diet including enough nutrients, not just with vegetables.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
Some people who are vegetarians believe that eating no meat...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ians believe that eating no meat or fish exerts positive impacts upon not only th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94090909091 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72746590225 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677272727273 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7850542619 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8181818182 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274362176187 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886699854301 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119108634832 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159367175399 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160138314294 0.056905535591 281% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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