Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important.
Discuss both views.
While there are people concur with the view that animals should be free from zoos, others believe that the way of preserving fauna is of great importance for the ecology as well as it is a mode of entertainment for the public. The essay will discuss both views and explain why the role of zoos is radical.
One the one hand, there two main detrimental implications on the life of wild animals in zoos. It is impossible for zoologists to artificially clone the natural environment for the living creatures. As a consequence, animals may be unable to adapt to man-made habitats, which finally shortens their life spans. Another drawback of zoos is rooted in the management of the establishments themselves. In certain zoos, wild animals are enslaved soly for financial rewards, the needs of the tamed animals are thus neglected. Food supplies and caregivers can be cut in order to maximize profit, plaguing the welfare of the zoo inhabitants.
One the other hand, the ecology and the masses are together benefited when animals are conserved in zoos. By residing in the dedicated shelters, wild creatures are safeguarded from the risk of being poached, hunted, and traded in the black market as their counterparts in the wilderness. Additionally, as there are experts who are adept at rearing and breeding animals, animals kept in zoo can flourish. When the endangered animals are released to the wild, they can foster ecological equilibrium. From the public perspective, zoos have become the mecca for people of all ages to relax with their loved ones in weekends or holidays, stamped out stresses and disturbances of everyday’s lives.
In sum, although being preserved may take a toll on the longevity and well-being of animals living in zoos, the safe heavens for animals provide protection, facilitate proliferation and supply a valuable location for people with leisure time. I believe that the virtues of zoos justify their existence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09717868339 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87314977552 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567398119122 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6592541465 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264627661219 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882442212583 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726872453285 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18119097637 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111860996526 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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