Some people believe that limiting the speed of vehicles to increase road safety is necessary, whereas others think that there are other ways to do so. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Modernization has opened a new horizon of establishment and problems. The threat to road safety is among the most lethal growing issue as the population of the world is increasing. Avoidance of over speeding is considered to be the most effective way of preventing road traffic accordingly while some people consider other methods to be more justified as an order to maintain safe driving. Before concluding, we need rationalizing both aspects in detail.
To begin with, vehicles on road with contended speed are considered to be safe as the driver usually control well and can prevent unpleasant happenings. For instance, international surveys reveal that most often the cause of lethal accidents are usually caused by over speeding and generally, people lose their control over their vehicles. One can say that maintaining a limited speed of cars and other automobiles over the road can make people safe from brutal incidents and disfigurements.
On contrary, strict implementation of certain traffic rules with personalization can improvise traffic more better than any other mean. In this context, I would like to put an example of Canada, road traffic accidents are at least rate in all states as inhabitants are forced to follow all road rules which include maintenance of signals, good car conditions, avoidance of overtaking. Therefore, eventual all traffic follows a smooth momentum as people get afraid of penalties which they can have on abating these rules.
To conclude, I per down saying that protected traffic by implementing strict legislation with strong penalties will be a more enhancing way. Although, avoidance of over speeding should also be taken into account.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 104, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...h personalization can improvise traffic more better than any other mean. In this context, I...
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Line 8, column 142, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...penalties will be a more enhancing way. Although, avoidance of over speeding should also...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, so, therefore, well, while, at least, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35580524345 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98788155896 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614232209738 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1501898017 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.166666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16481205719 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572231701713 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460884004158 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966561609649 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498604777162 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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