In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behaviour.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Nurturing of children is the foremost responsibility of any nation in order to have a better future. Nowadays the kids are having the wide spectrum of attitude issues which eventually affects their school lives. Before, delineating the solution of such problem one needs to understand the underlying causes of students bad behaviors. Hence, the below paragraphs are dealing with the causes and solution of this unaddressed issues.
To begin with, an antisocial attitude is a key factor with which today's child is suffering. As a matter of fact, every kid has built his or her own life which unfortunately gives birth to working problems in their classes as they are not ready to share their thoughts to the environment of the whole class becomes sick. For instance, with the advent of tablets and iPads, students have stopped playing with each other and becoming busier in themselves. In other words, the loss of communication makes children refrain from healthy School activities which hamper their academic and social growth.
Let's move towards the solution which actually lies under the heading of integrated study styles. Although today's world is fully loaded with gadgets, by motivating children in team building activities one can make them compelling to create a good social association between the participants. To cite an example, frequent Inter School or interclass science competition can motivate candidates to break their personality shells and to interchange each other ideas which are a need of today. One can say that, by virtue of enhanced academic interaction between students, school administration can take hold of this outgrowing problem of socialization.
To sum up, I pen down by writing that learner’s of the 21st century is full of social problems which can only be dealt with intense interacting activities in their schools. Otherwise, it will behave like a growing monster which will envelop the next generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, hence, if, so, for instance, as a matter of fact, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31612903226 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8659906115 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1375401329 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.714285714 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179638627936 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650293387415 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453782442041 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112280630116 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494457857097 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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