As technological innovation brings about rapid changes,retraining becomes a lifelong necessity therefore,industry should take responsibility for education training and retraining of their workers. To what extent do you agree to this idea
The 21st century is an era of technology innovations likewise, the life of an individual is having a continuous momentum and change. In order to combat such social challenges, the education system needs to be optimized. It is a hypothesis that the organization should take over the system of education in order to face the challenges of the new modern world. As far as my opinion is concerned, I confidently agree with this statement and explaining the reasons for my agreement in the paragraph below.
Unquestionably, studies with practical skills will be an ultimate impact of industrial based learning. As a matter of fact, the curriculum made by big organizations will make the learners more capable of doing their jobs with unmatchable competency then what a student do by just reading a book. For instance, China is renowned for its eye-catching development and underlying reasons of success is their technically oriented certification courses which they have refined according to their jobs and job description. In other words, the education system with more industrial skills brings a new generation with distinguished success.
Secondly, unemployment is the major issue of today’s world and this monster can be manageable by motivating youngster towards these courses which are designed by professionals who are actually well known for today’ needs. Besides that, many institutions are conducting special education curriculums with the pre-course job commitment. In this regards, I would like to put down an example of Canadian medical agency, they are offering certain courses with Echocardiography and research with before education commitment of employment. As they know that people are in deadly need in these fields so they are designing such courses and motivating youth with the glamour of employment. One can say, that if curriculums of young’s education are practical hands than unemployment can vanish from society.
To conclude, I per down by writing that education system should be encouraged to hand over to the practical hands of the modern world for ultimate growth of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, as a matter of fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41265060241 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16092896341 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566265060241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0132869837 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.357142857 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138940423306 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478044731641 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249450324232 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860233161953 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315359611335 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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