In recent years, there has been considerable discussion about how to deal with crime reduction, and this has turned into a dilemma facing many. Many people believe that the best way to tackle this is to place people in prison for longer periods, while others think that other measures will be more effective. From my perspective, both longer prison sentences and alternative strategies should be simultaneously adopted.
On the one hand, there are several benefits of giving law offenders longer prison sentences. The immediate one is that longer prison sentences could act as a deterrent for someone who is thinking of committing a crime. We all know that there is not much freedom in prison. If this harsh policy is carried out, criminals may be afraid of being deprived of their freedom.
On the other hand, others have proposed less strict strategies, like education, to prevent crime. This policy allows some teachers to teach criminals some survival skills and instill in them a sense of social responsibility, thereby temporarily preventing them from engaging in illegal activities.
In my opinion, both viewpoints have advantages and disadvantages, but I still maintain that the government is advised to combine longer prison sentences and alternative strategies to fight crime. If we just carry out lengthy imprisonment without teaching criminals anything useful, it will be wasting their time. Also, the government needs to spend a lot of money on criminals’ daily necessities. Likewise, the short-term imprisonment could not effectively help improve criminals’ moral character since they are confined to an environment full of villains. To conclude, there are pros and cons of longer jail sentences, so governments must continue to develop effective policies to ensure crime will reduced in the long run.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 701, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'reduce'
Suggestion: reduce
...effective policies to ensure crime will reduced in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, may, so, still, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35191637631 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93100332857 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637630662021 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1598633968 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.714285714 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28598633161 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850579312031 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082018457346 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160580868941 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892876840952 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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