Some people believe that managers are responsible for the organization’s success, while others think various features of the organization play a vital role in it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people think that managers have a main role in the organizations and they are the main reason to get success. In contrast, others especially the youth, tend to believe that different amenities such as wages are more important than everything. In this essay, this issue will be discussed.
It is certainly obvious that good manager affects the company and they are able to impress their clerks. A recent study in Stanford University indicates more than 68 percent of people think if they have a good manager, they can work more brilliantly and they will be more convenient at work place. For instance, people respect to the boss who has a polite behavior with them and all of them are comfortable in the work place. Hence, the competent managers has a vital role in the companies.
Turning to the other side of the argument, the facilities that companies consider for their employees are extremely important. It leads to absorbing a wide range of people to the company because when people go to the interview, they pay attention to the equipment at first. For example, many young and talented person tend to work in companies with various features and augment their incomes in these companies. Therefore, it has vivid effects in the companies consciously.
To recapitulate, in spite of the fact that the facilities play brilliant role in companies, the competent managers are so important and they can be an agent for people to stay or leave the company. Personally, I believe the most important reason to work in the company is the manager and if I am not able to work with someone as a manager, I tend to leave that organization and find a new career.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in contrast, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79442508711 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7187302869 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498257839721 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4837555911 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.846153846 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195917887265 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717604833689 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639005707634 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125386079366 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414170667533 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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