Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the past, people led very restrictive lives, they took the profession of their fathers, ate the foods locally available, and lived in the places their families had lived since immemorial time. This has changed in the modern day, as people have much more freedom to pursue whatever they want to do. This essay will point out why the choices people have nowadays are plentiful.
At present, when we think about having a lot of options, the best example to mention is transportation. In the 18th century, the main means of human transport were horses or sailing boats. With these types of transportation, it takes months to transport people and goods to different countries. However, with today’s modern means of transport such as container ships or airplanes, it only takes a few weeks, even a few days to transport goods across the country. For a prime example, it only takes more than 6 hours to deliver goods from HCM to Osaka by plane instead of weeks of sailing as before.
On the other hand, with the development of science and technology, students also have more choices in education. Before, all students had to study in school and had to study directly with their teachers. Now, we can study in many different places such as the center or study at home with tutors. Furthermore, we can study online without going to school. For instance, due to the influence of Coronavirus, all schools had to close and switch to online learning.
In conclusion, I believe that today we have more options than ever before, and more and more choices are based on the advancement of technology.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 365, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ut why the choices people have nowadays are plentiful. At present, when we think ...
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Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...th their teachers. Now, we can study in many different places such as the center or study at h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81751824818 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62200307041 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576642335766 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7359934029 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2857142857 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159950972473 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566407413295 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410216112866 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907096598986 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198782930502 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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