Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
As the quality of life has been significantly improved recently, people are introduced to more opportunities and a variety of choices to their needs. Controversially, along with the vast amount of options, it poses consequences when people are overwhelmed and got themselves lost in the middle of many possibilities. Further in this essay, the influences as well as the clear examples of “too many” will be mentioned thoroughly.
First and foremost, like a natural reaction, human tend to struggle when encountering a situation where they are obliged to make a decision. In this case, it is obviously the cause of “too many”. When confronting such scenario, people would likely to scrub their heads and consider the outcomes when picking an option. They are afraid that the choice is not utilized and it could not satisfy and reach their demand. In addition, by the time people figure out what to decide, it might have been too late. On other cases, wrong options could presumably make them regretful and unhappy.
Looking at the bright side, “too many” can present individuals with variable opportunity which supports their livings in the way they choose. For instance, colleges nowadays are much more accessible thanks to a great number of ways of assessment. Moreover, students can even travel abroad with scholarship which is obtained easily. As a result, with a bunch of choices, comes with more opportunities. Not only can it give people more chances in livings, it also plays an important role in providing human with suitable requirement.
In conclusion, “too many” could be consequential if people are indecisive, hesitated or even confused, nevertheless, it is often supposed to bring positive effects to the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 318, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26071428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95061174909 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632142857143 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7406708884 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173410605974 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568005287134 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367469351273 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976537732134 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229503174005 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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