Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
These days, most of the people have been inexplicably exposed to so many choices, which sometimes prevents them from thinking clearly and making a good decision. But that does not mean that amount of choices should be reduced. I partially disagree with this statement and I would like to point out my thoughts and find a reasonable solution.
On the one hand, making a choice is a personal decision and only the person is able to do that, whether it would be the best or the worst thing for him/her. Furthermore, choosing from a wide variety of opportunities may be hard and sometimes confusing. For instance, finding a right place to go on vacation can definitely be really frustrating due to the huge range of exotic places all over the world. In that case, finding out the best option is based on individual preferences and a human's desire to visit this particular place.
On the other hand, being able to choose from a whole bunch of categories would be quite enjoyable and pleasently surpriseful. Take the television as an example. Literally, we have tons of varied channels, movies and other types of TV productions. Everyone can find so many interesting things to watch. We are able to spend the whole day in watching and listening television programmes and stuff. In my opinion, people who are doing outdoor activities and prefer to be outside is because of the TV industry. I would agree that here we have too many choices.
In conclusion, I would say that cannot make discussions about which one to choose or not. In both cases, it is reasonable and useful to have them, while in other areas they could have negative impacts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... particular place. On the other hand, being able to choose from a whole bunch ...
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Suggestion: bunch
...ther hand, being able to choose from a whole bunch of categories would be quite enjoyable ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, may, really, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77192982456 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70165413348 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60701754386 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9997888507 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177240372775 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585979681864 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834020791427 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102278902043 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661654373411 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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