Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is universally accepted that moving into a foreign country might have a wide range of serious practical and social problems. However, I partially disagree with this statement and I would like to support my views in the following paragraphs.

On the one hand, living or working in a different country could have a negative impact on people who doesn't speak the native language. For instance, the process of finding a good job may be quite stressful for some people. Being unable to understand the language and not being able to do your work efficiently can turn into a nightmare for the worker. Moreover, it may lead to failure and dissatisfying experience for the person and for the institution he/she works for. In addition, if people were not capable of speaking the language fluently and could not cope with their daily basis, such as shopping, purchasing medicines and paying bills, that would enable them to work and live peacefully and calmly.

On the other hand, the ability of not knowing the spoken language can make the live of the person harder. That issue would be the language barrier. If an individual has been experiencing difficulties with the language, it would not allow him to adapt into the new environment and make him think of himself as a less meaningful part of the society. For example, if he doesn't understand the local culture and custodies, that would have enabled him to form new social contacts. He could say something that might have been offensive to the new culture.

In conclusion, I would say that living outside your home country can be quite disturbing and complex to handle at first, but with a little bit of confidence and motivation, everything is possible.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89655172414 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68579741025 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565517241379 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4475662302 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.230769231 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201071687758 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716892138298 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626156423823 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133239190638 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803455525944 0.056905535591 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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