It is argued that there are variety of choices for people to choose nowadays. This essay agrees that people have a lot of decisions currently. Firstly, this essay will discuss the reason behind those numerous choices and secondly, discuss what kind of decision are most varied for everyone.
In the world of technology information are now available to everyone therefore, people have a lot of instructions about what they are keen on. With the internet which restores an uncountable data of everything, by searching online people are able to get information instantly. Nowadays finding for a hotel or a school is much easier than in the past, rather than go to see each school and hotel people are able to do it online. For instant, by searching on university’s websites people who want to study abroad are able to make a list of universities and then decide a suitable one to apply in.
The need of technology is on the rise with evolution of many technology brands such as Samsung or Apple thus, a number of smartphones and technological devices are available to people to buy. For example, Apple is a high-end retailer which offers a ton of brand phone and many other technological devices such as watches and laptops. The more worldwide technology brands appear, the more available goods people are free to choose.
In conclusion, as a result of the improvement in internet, it offers a lot of choices nowadays and with the need of living things is increasing therefore, too many decisions are available to people today.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90384615385 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86276596914 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526923076923 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0925780152 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.909090909 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192132499866 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764868690027 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516235030699 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116502210528 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310775837369 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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