Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
From the perspective of some individuals, nowadays, we have to face the dilemma of having too many choices on several problems and this situation is do more harm than good. However, I tend to disagree with that statement because of the belief that it can extend our opportunity to find out what is the most suitable for ourselves.
In fact, the number of universities in many countries around the world has undergone a dramatic increase over the past few years. That means a lot of students will gain benefit from this variety because it gives them a chance to choose the one that is more convenient for their movement and can satisfy their requirement of a well-funded education system as well. Therefore, various choices of universities take a leading role in promoting the quantity of undergraduate students and help them fulfill their dream.
Apart from the benefit expressed above, the advantage of having different choices can also be observed when people apply for a job. A wide job market is a springboard for citizens to freely decide which has reasonable salary and be able to improve their current economic climate. Furthermore, various jobs give them a chance to exposed to different work environments and find out the one that fit their ability and their favor, in addition.
To sum up, I think that having a variety of choices cannot be a detriment at all because it just stimulates the development of our society as well as gives us an improved quality of life. Thus, I believe that we should make use of this situation and gain more benefits from it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
... several problems and this situation is do more harm than good. However, I tend to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, i think, in addition, in fact, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83703703704 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72055630557 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588888888889 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.2386533966 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.6 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123151573432 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485535001779 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642792604271 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824544720715 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799432166699 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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