Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company organization.
Why this might be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
The fast growth of this society has directly influenced many people's attitude towards different aspects of life. Nowadays, more and more individuals no longer search for a job in a company or an organization but independently create their own careers and this situation is becoming one of the current affairs that people have to consider about.
On the one hand, there are several reasons explain why people, especially young adults try to be self-employed rather than applying for a job like former generations. First of all, the job market in many recent years has become more and more severe that just a few number of employees can follow their favorite occupations. In addition, some individuals are not satisfied with their salary because it cannot help them afford the basic necessities of their family's living. Therefore, it is understandable why they now tend to build up their own careers to fulfill their dreams and extend opportunity to make more profit.
Furthermore, in many countries around the world, young people nowadays are encouraged to establish their own companies because this helps those nations boost their economic development. With their flexibility, creativity and good health condition combined with the contribution of advanced technology, young generations have an advantage in startup and have a chance to make use of those benefits to achieve more success in their careers. Thus, this society is a springboard for them to be self-employed and show their own ability in different fields.
However, as a matter of fact, being self- employed also remains many unexpected problems, Some individuals are unable to have enough money to invest for a long term. Following that, they usually lack of experience and have many skill gaps, so they may find it quite difficult to catch up with other companies and meet the demand of society. Furthermore, they have to be completely responsible for unpredictable problems such as plummeting profits, economic crisis and other insurmountable ones. Therefore, people absolutely should launch a full-scale consideration before deciding to set up their own companies.
In conclusion, I think that although being self-employed has many drawbacks, it is still a good way for young individuals to express their ability as well as satisfy their aim. After all, they should gain more understanding of the requirement of consumers and find out more markets for consumption if they want to maintain an uninterrupted economic growth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 261, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
...become more and more severe that just a few number of employees can follow their favorite ...
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Line 2, column 429, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... because it cannot help them afford the basic necessities of their familys living. Therefore, it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, after all, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30303030303 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98457501012 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.9604472518 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223940725267 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890335165 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871560606294 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135735522009 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269920718558 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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