Some people believe that today we have too many choices.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Many recent years, some individuals tend to feel inconvenient when they have too many choices to decide in several aspects of life with the believe that this situation just leads everything become more complex. I agree with this statement in some ways, but I also realize that its benefits still be observed in our society.
Nowadays, it is thought that the more choices we have, the better decision we make. Absolutely, the huge range of different choices gives us a chance to find out the one that we feel most interested tin or most suitable for our standard. For example, various types of meat such as beef, pork, chicken or sheep are wonderful sources for us to freely choose according to our favor, the quality or color of the piece of meat. Besides, different kinds of food like fish, vegetable or eggs help us cook more meals to meet various people 's taste. One more field that I think having various choices is very important is finding a job. Many older people prefer the society in which everyone has to do farming because of having no choices. I definitely disagree with that idea, I tend to argue each of us has our own dream, own ability, own situation, so why we have to do the same with others? Having different choices of job means having various way to reach our target and be able to find out the one that most suitable for us and for our careers.
However, there is also a negative effect of this situation that we have to consider. That's the wide range of choices sometimes makes us feel more difficult to decide what is the best in some cases and therefore we are also likely to be led into dilemma. So I think despite a lot of advantages, it also contains many drawbacks that we have to notice about.
To sum up, I believe that various choices help our life become better by improving the quality of decision that we make. Although different aspects result in different outcome, I think we should extend that variety to create more and more choices for people and for ourselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... decide in several aspects of life with the believe that this situation just leads everythi...
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Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...ide in several aspects of life with the believe that this situation just leads everythi...
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Line 2, column 356, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to accord'.
Suggestion: to accord
...nderful sources for us to freely choose according to our favor, the quality or color of t...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...his situation that we have to consider. Thats the wide range of choices sometimes mak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, as to, for example, i think, such as, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5540166205 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36534604612 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509695290859 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8742950063 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.6 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267556294258 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949207568299 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623404171915 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168508781709 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635671064843 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.