Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can be serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Over the past few years, many countries around the world has undergone a dramatic change in number of migrants who are looking for a better quality of life. However, in fact, living in other nations has never been easy and may lead those people to several problems. But in my opinion, there are also some advantages that can be observed.
On the one hand, people who live abroad are likely face the dilemma of language barrier. They may find it very difficult to get confidence in communicating with native inhabitants because of several factors such as being lack of vocabulary or cultural difference. That makes interacting as well as getting on with others become harder for them. Apart from the practical concern expressed above, unemployment is also a burden on those migrants' living. It is inevitable that many employers prefer native applicants to the foreign ones because they think that people from other countries are unlikely to cooperate well with their indigenous colleagues. Therefore, besides getting difficulty in transcending language barrier, they also may not afford the basic necessities of life.
However, we should launch a full-scale consideration into this situation. From the perspective of many people, living in a foreign country gives them a chance to be exposed to different cultures and help them expand their knowledge as well. For example, living in China gives us an advantage in studying their cultural specificity such as Lunar New Year or their traditional costume. Furthermore, a developed country like the USA can extend their opportunity to have a better social welfare and security. Thus, those advantages are key factors influencing the increase in number of migrants every year.
In conclusion, I think that living abroad can be a springboard for promoting the quality of life. After all, governments should take more measures to narrow the gap between native inhabitants and foreign people to help them adapt to the new environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'gif'?
Suggestion: gif
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, well, after all, apart from, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22257053292 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80845553462 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583072100313 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7039764978 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.125 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6875 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175871711429 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547477997364 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342332373306 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999513094427 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167396245791 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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