Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now "one big traffic jam"
How true do you think this statement is?
What measures can governments take to discourage people fro using their cars?
Nowadays, more and more people tend to buy their own cars rather than travelling by taxi or public transportation. That makes our street full of cars and there are no longer any spaces for other means. Because of this situation, many areas in the world become just like “a big traffic jam”.
There are some reasons explain why cars become so common to our life. First of all, people may feel more comfortable and convenient with their own means. They can freely decide what time to set up or can stop at anywhere they want without having to go on route like travelling by bus or train,... Besides, car brings private space for people and their family, it also helps them feel more comfortable and relaxed than staying in crowded bus.
Secondly, we all know that the price of cars has dramatically decreased in many recent years. Therefore, today, everyone can buy their own cars without worrying about how much they cost. That means there are more and more cars appearing on our streets and this situation can result in a lot of serious problems. The emission from car’s motor can cause air pollution and this phenomenon is the main factor of global warming and ice melting in Polar areas. Furthermore, too many cars on the roads explains why congestion become more regularly nowadays.
So, in conclusion, I think that having too many owned cars can cause a lot of negative effects on our life. Thus, government should take more measures to solve this problem such as improving the quality of public transportations, reducing the cost of those means’ tickets and besides, forbidding cars on many main roads in cities center to prevent congestion in rush hours. Just when they do that, our cities may have a chance to be less polluted and more convenient for inhabitants.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 292, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...on route like travelling by bus or train,... Besides, car brings private space for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85016286645 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54759363285 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602605863192 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4258548656 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238475762539 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840251845818 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312749877129 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155110114406 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222103596765 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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