Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, sharing information is believed to be useful and necessary in different fields. That's the reason why many people tend to encourage everyone to exchange as many details as they know. However, on the other hand, there are also some individuals who don't completely agree with that idea.
Everybody understands that, the more we know about the problem, the more easily we can solve it. Therefore, sharing information benefits a lot in improving our knowledge as well as our skills to deal with various situations in life. For instance, doing scientific research requires everybody in that group has to work together and exchange all details which they know to complete their study. Doing this will help them achieve their target and bring benefits for the whole society. One more example depicts the advantages of sharing information can be easily observed in many schools - where students are encouraged to discuss with others to find out the answer of a question or the meaning of a poem. That will help them understand and remember all the theories faster. Thus, it is necessary in some cases to share your details and work together for a better solution.
Having said that, there are also many situations that people tend to keep their information in secret rather than sharing to others. The reason is that those details are invaluable and important that they can not share freely. Such as the experience that they have to meet a lot of difficulties to find out or the information which relate to the national secret, all of them are so valuable and never be shared easily. Therefore, in many times, we can't force someone to exchange their knowledge because it may directly influence on our life.
In conclusion, I think that sharing information has both advantages and disadvantages that we have to notice about. Thus, we should exchange them smartly and especially just in reasonable situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00943396226 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65568496087 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531446540881 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7442999058 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218832358055 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735506712408 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666204516058 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13859026079 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326142675405 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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