While there are few peoples who support much information sharing for the better perspective in science, business and academic purpose, rest of them believe that some information can not be shared publicly which value is too important. In my opinion, lots of information on academic and scientific research further helps to propagate it, whereas sharing valuable information of a business can be harmful for it.
Firstly, sharing lots of knowledge on scientific research can help people to continue their researches which topics are similar to these. For example, a theory which has not been corroborated or proved as a false, later a researcher will not obviously works on it and spends his precious time to again falsify it.Nowadays, mammoth buildings are constructed at greater pace. Engineers are building tunnels under the sea and connecting one nation to another that in turn minimizes the time barrier and makes travel convenient. So masses can devote there imperative time in significant work. However, there are some disadvantages when the scientific information is misused by someone without concession. Additionally, sharing information and data on academic world help people to learn quickly with better understanding from available resources.
On the other hand, sharing business information of a company which is confidential or valuable for long term purpose would cause deleterious effects for that company. For instance, if the personal information retrieved by Facebook for their own purpose to provide better facilities to their users is shared publicly, then it could affects their users to stop using Facebook to keep invisible their personal information from public.
In conclusion, although to achieve the summit of academic and scientific research it is necessary to share lots of information which are available all around the world, sharing confidential information publicly of business could hinder the improvements of that business. So, it is necessary to take care the information at the time of sharing regarding academic, business or scientific research.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'work'
Suggestion: work
..., later a researcher will not obviously works on it and spends his precious time to a...
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Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
...users is shared publicly, then it could affects their users to stop using Facebook to k...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 397, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...demic, business or scientific research.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, regarding, so, then, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51971326165 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00632461535 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537634408602 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.3912676815 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.0 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393737451936 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173245862345 0.084324248473 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948360462139 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256618563685 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105651351444 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.