Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is widely believed that human beings are living in an unprecedented age of options where we are flooded with a substantial number of choices. I totally agree with this and that is all thanks to the revolutionary advancement of technology.
The Internet and globalisation has been bombarding us with infinite choices. It is ranging from something that serves our daily needs to other aspects of our lives such as our education and career. To illustrate, until recently, Starbucks has proudly introduced more than 80,000 beverage options for us to choose from. Hence, there will be very little chances where we cannot pick up our preferred options. Besides, online shopping is another worth-mentioning example where there are countless of products for us to look for even when we single out our need one by typing their names on the search engine. Apart from that, high school students are often overwhelmed with a big deal of major options which takes them days to decide on the most suitable one.
Although we are surrounded with choices, it is considered more a boon than a bane. Firstly, having too many options ironically drives us away from picking up our final decision. This is mainly due to the fact that all commercial are seeking for our attention to their products by presenting all their positive aspects. Hence, even after we have come up with our most suitable choice, we can still be distracted by the benefits of others. Besides, overloading with options potentially leads to frustration and eventually stress for we may take a lot of time doing so but end up not reaching our last option. In short, being provided with a vast number of information, instead, paralyses our decision-making ability.
To sum up, despite being provided with a diversity of options, we still find it hard to decide which is the most suitable for us. Hence, in order to eliminate the unnecessary choices, we need to be sure of our requirements as well as if that thing is affordable to us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 546, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
... for us to look for even when we single out our need one by typing their names on t...
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Line 7, column 270, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l as if that thing is affordable to us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, so, still, well, apart from, in short, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89085545723 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8071376753 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587020648968 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.039953086 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.625 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1875 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0897510639099 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342504628749 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034227404727 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0629377937865 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322038824056 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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