Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In today’s modern life, options in every fields have been soared up. Some groups believes that this development put people such a condition in which they have many various choices. I am surely agree with this idea. The capitalism and increased awarness are possible causes for this situation.
At first, capitalism is the main economical reason which creates a lot of options for people. For instance, it is approved that after installation of capitalism in modern life, many work field has created and eventually boosted production of goods. As a natural consecuence of excessive manufactuaring, all people have a chance to reach and select one of them depending on their budgets. Briefly, the more goods create the more choices for people.
Secondly, the surged awarness of people about what is going on around world also increase options in their life. As an example,the social media has placed in the center of many people that serves like a library to learn and compare many things virtually. Someone can buy a laptop after comparing a dozen of them on the social media. It links people to a world which filled with the uncountable options of things.
In conclusion, capitalism with increased production and social media interaction of people may create many options. I am strongly favor the idea that humankind has more choices in these days. In the future, it is also obvious that many more options of people will be added.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04583333333 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66364086147 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.324328643 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7333333333 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207800356787 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709516231334 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720817225339 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133482266276 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816940681662 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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