Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In the present day, an increasing number of people are concerned about the phenomenon that modern people have excessive options. Personally, it is absolutely agree with this point of view. Checking over the movie industry and educational domain will indicate the problems.
First of all, the human race witnessed a considerable development of motion capture industry from monochrome movies to online streaming movies. By the time the cinema was born, the only accessory that people had was heading to the cinema theater to enjoy the films. Eventually, due to the exploration of the Internet, people’s choices were widen into watching movies on PCs, on cellphones or tablets. Not only the variation of electronic device occurred but also the multiplicity of cinematic genre appeared. This situation results a difficulty in choosing films.
Secondly, educational field copes with serious troubles which relate to the variety of information’s sources. Students usually struggle on finding trusted sources, especially on scientific subject where information has to be accurate. Obviously, this statement comes in sight correspondingly to the side effect of having too many choices.
In conclusion, the excessiveness of choices causes surprisingly unpredictable problems. Taking cinema industry and educational site for instinct. Therefore, it is state that in front of multiple options, people ought to choose wisely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...e options. Personally, it is absolutely agree with this point of view. Checking over ...
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Line 5, column 346, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'widened'.
Suggestion: widened
...he Internet, people's choices were widen into watching movies on PCs, on cellpho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78773584906 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1475344513 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698113207547 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8710185876 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.6428571429 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162544194451 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505475866609 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731121706046 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911368611906 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568529217983 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.71 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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