Some people believe that old employees are good for companies but other think that adults are good ones. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
Undoubtedly, workers are crucial part of every business which take businesses at higher level of success. However, a majority of people consider that senior employees are beneficial for industries revolutions because they are more patients and have huge knowledge. On the other hand, the another section of society support young people the reason is that they have well familiar with modern techniques, more energetic as well. This easy will shed light on both prospective along with my perception.
The one school of thought said that grey haired people are essential for businesses to get a achievements. In addition to this, the old workers are so much patients rather than youngsters so that is why they can handle any situations with stay patiently. Even though, senior citizens are knowing vastly about the previous methods which they used to achieving their goals and got lots of success in earlier times. For example, Anil Ambani who is older but have a successful business person. Beside that, he not only earn vast amount of wealth to use his old techniques but also so much name and fame which involve him in a list of world’s rich and successful businessmen’s name.
The another school of thought believe that young people are necessary for the progress of companies as compared with older because they are the future of nations. Furthermore, the main reason is that adults are most energetic than senior employees so that is why they are doing their work more quickly to get faster results. Moving further, , the energy level of adults allow them to increase dramatically numbers of success and opportunities of their promotions. In contrast, young people are a new generation of regions so they have profound in modern technologies as well as they reach their businesses at peak level of progress due to expanding these latest techniques which lead to lots of promotion chances. For instance,Buzz Khalifa in Dubai which completed in 4 January 2010 is an example of young architecture’s work who utilised modern methods to build it.
In conclusion, although, older and younger masses are providing achievements to their businesses in various manners. In my opinion, they both are similar for the drastic rise of industry’s progression with their own ways. Likewise, if grey haired people have previous techniques than adults have latest ones. Due to the mixture of both the methods which can take business at peak level of success and progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, likewise, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2088.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16831683168 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86313305038 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527227722772 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7432534481 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38888888889 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128020913729 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446935140233 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373831579298 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870717627687 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263436496388 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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