Some people believe that online reading material should be only used for child to learn to read, whereas, believe that only printed materials should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this contemporary era, parents are focusing on their children learning behaviors. Some of the individuals deem that internet is a good path for teenagers to learn to read while the opponents trust that the old traditional print media is the right medium to read. Personally speaking, both the methods print media and e-book have similar value and need for better reading skills.
On the one hand, hard format is very effective for children where they can have full concentration on the topic. They cannot be destructed through popping some advertisements. Furthermore, a child can read for a long time and there is no harm to his eyes from the blue rays which decline the ratio of eyesight as well as it do not create stress on the brain. For instance, whenever I prepare for my exams so I can learn quite easily from the notes which are in print form and it doesn’t waste my juncture.
On the other hand, internet is very trending and capturing the globe due to plethora of resources. A child can learn with the help of vast pictures and videos of a particular object from the web. For example, my little brother was so weak in his basic studies, like pronunciations and meanings so, his teacher showed him an online dictionary (Meriam Webster) and few videos on YouTube, after few weeks he learned in a better way. Moreover, the juvenile should be familiar with the online materials so that in future they should easily do their assignments and research.
In conclusion, I viewed both the methods of learning they are equally important for the grooming learning behavior of a youngster. In my opinion, children should be taught on both the methods that they should be able to take advantage mutually in the future
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Suggestion: Some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76588628763 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63222388644 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0995377614 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.615384615 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263252906643 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889057341415 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643859628147 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159918154743 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435098462045 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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