Some people believe that playing a musical instrument can be beneficial in many different ways. Others think it is a waste of time to play a musical instrument. Discuss both views and give your opinion
The count of people who tend to learn playing musical instruments has gone to a level never before. However, where some are in its favour considering it to be advantages other are this agree according to them it is useless activity. This essay examines both aspects and argues that following such trend is actually of no harm to the people.
To embark with, it has professional and prodessional benefits to the individuals. Nowadays, music industries are rapidly flourish as well as the demand of musicians are also increasing. If, people will start their caeer in this profession, they can earn the handsome money in this work. Other than that, it act as a stress buster because when someone listen the songs they forget their worries and tensions. Also, it give the relief to person in his or her monotonous life.
The alternative view is that everyone can not get the merits from it, because they have no talent regarding it and they have not show their interest in the music. So, that is why they are consider music is a waste of time.
In my opinion, learning a skill can never be a waste of time, it is benefical for peopke in some particular ways. Certainly, learning a music is quite challenging for many masses because they have no any skill related to it. Although, they have not learn how to playing music instrument in their classess time but, it give the happiness and enjoyable environment to the people when they are play music for themselves.
In conclusion, learning how to play music instrument can benefical for people however, limitations related it should not be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to play'.
Suggestion: to play
The count of people who tend to learn playing musical instruments has gone to a level...
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Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'flourished'.
Suggestion: flourished
... Nowadays, music industries are rapidly flourish as well as the demand of musicians are ...
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Line 2, column 307, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'acts'?
Suggestion: acts
...money in this work. Other than that, it act as a stress buster because when someone...
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Line 2, column 351, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'listens'.
Suggestion: listens
...as a stress buster because when someone listen the songs they forget their worries and...
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Line 2, column 417, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
...et their worries and tensions. Also, it give the relief to person in his or her mono...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'showed', 'shown'.
Suggestion: showed; shown
...o talent regarding it and they have not show their interest in the music. So, that i...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
... in the music. So, that is why they are consider music is a waste of time. In my opi...
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Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...nging for many masses because they have no any skill related to it. Although, they...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
... related to it. Although, they have not learn how to playing music instrument in thei...
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Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
...strument in their classess time but, it give the happiness and enjoyable environment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, regarding, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80072463768 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62563691876 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554347826087 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9784595632 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6428571429 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336998955728 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110635273359 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919927072192 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192667487922 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082923440193 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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