Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers,
should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others
believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is widely argued about the country professionals are supposed to work in, some people agree that those trained people should work for the country which offers educational resources, while others argue that professionals have freedom to decide which country they prefer to work in. From my perspective, I tend to agree that prefessional individuals should work in the country where they have been trained.
There are some reasons why we ought to allow people to choose the country by themselves. On the one hand, it's the right of all individuals to decide their work places, and the main factors that will affect their decisions may include culture, living environment, and salary. On the other hand, some prefessionals are willing to work for their homeland after graduation. For example, Qian Xuesen, a famous Chinese physician who graduated from MIT, was keen to make contribution to China. Although his activity was supervised by USA, he came back to China eventually.
Meanwhile, persuding prefessional educated people to work in their trained country is resonable as well. Firstly, it will take a long time to train such specialized individuals, such as doctors, which need to be educated for at least 6 years and be trained for another 2 years. Secondly, the cost of training equipment and the social resources that should be put in cannot be neglected. Finally, there are always large demand of preofessional employees who are able to create more profits than low-educated empolyees because of the strict job requirement.
In conclusion, although we should respect people's wish of deciding their work countries, it is hopeful that more professionals can work in the country they have been trained because of the highly expenditure and big demand.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...country by themselves. On the one hand, its the right of all individuals to decide ...
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Line 5, column 543, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ated empolyees because of the strict job requirement. In conclusion, although ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19649122807 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85264236851 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589473684211 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6840640372 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.416666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9166666667 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384046213686 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131652513401 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101835670875 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23757879667 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886587012797 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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