Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is an argument about whether individuals are given a large amount of opportunity to choose their living style in recent years. From my perspective, I agree that nowadays we are able to make a lot of decisions.
The government takes measures to make sure all the citizens have the same right to decide how to spend their time. Firstly, we are encouraged to accept education from a young age, but no one will be forced to attend school if they are not willing to. Secondly, interests are respected in our daily lives; not only can we develop them as habits, but we can also select one of them as our major in university and be educated in scientific methods. Finally, the developed transport infrastructure offers a convenient way for us to travel or live overseas.
Although some jobs have a limited majority of college graduates, students are given some opportunities to change their major or get a second degree. The cost of changing the majority is slight, and we are given the right to choose more than once. Meanwhile, the art areas, such as painting, music, literature, and film, are open to anyone who wants to pick them up as a secondary job. The limitation of art is not wealth anymore, but talent and interest. For example, my tutor published several novels while he majored in internet technology at university.
In conclusion, I think there are too many choices that are placed in front of us, and normally we can make a decision without hesitation because of our open society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76245210728 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71579681236 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63601532567 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1280269313 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.583333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120254947828 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394897987329 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453596670582 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764174208402 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284121005963 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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