Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree .?
In the present day, finding somethings to release after hard-studying day for children is no longer in difficulty. There are a variety of technology entertainment that can support children to relax inside their house. Meanwhile, some people believe that reading stories from a book still a finest solution for relaxing and I totally agree with this opinion. In this essay, there will be some benefits and drawbacks consolidate my viewpoint.
On the one hand, books still play an integral role in entertainment that films or computer games cannot replace them. There is rarely has a game that not only help rested but also can convey the information and knowledge to the consumer. In addition, reading also can enhance children’s vocabulary and their analysing skill this point will help readers abandon their peers behind at school. For instance, most of participants in Road to Olympia show repond that they usually read books after school-time as a method to relax.
On the other hand, spending too much time on playing computer games and watching TV will take up other working time such as studying and doing exercise. Therefore, these children usually receive low academic results at school or uncomplicated get eyes and heart diseases like myopic and overweight. Moreover, nowadays, the game market have various games are not censored which simulate violence including killing people and robbery. As a result of a survey about criminal adolescence, about 90% of young law-breakers respond that they commit a sin because emulating the video games or for game purposes.
In conclusion, the parents should teach their children to spend more time to read books instead of watching TV or playing games.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20289855072 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71625096846 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644927536232 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.7190194805 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.461538462 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312666488119 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952543048839 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752498310289 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178878371091 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286331302021 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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