Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that reading books will useful than watching TV or playing computer games, while others do not approve of it. Personally, I partly agree with this idea and this essay will provide both reading books and watching TV their own advantages on people.

It is true that Sort of entertainments are developing significantly nowadays to serve people's demand and media plays an important role on this development. The first positive impact of watching TV is people can watch and listen to the latest news from various channels which help them update their information quickly and easily by looking through the screens. Moreover, by listening to some foreign channels, children can learn numerous new vocabulary which very good for their speaking skills and aboard the number of new words that they have. With technology development, children now can play video games to entertain which increase their skills effectively such as reflex skills when playing action games, analyzing skills by playing puzzle games, and so on. Furthermore, playing video games is a great way to relax and relieve stress after hardworking days because they can use games as a method to disconnect from the pressure of school and daily tasks.
On the other hand, reading books is still suitable for every age and brings lots of good impact of people's minds, especially young children. If parents let their kids read books when kids have understood words and how to speak, it will rise children's imagination greatly. For example, when children read fairy tales books they will have to think and use their creativity to know the storylines. As a result, their brains will gain intelligence and own a better memory than other kids who do not read books

In conclusion, reading books has given major advantages to people.
However, I believe that if people combine reading with playing video games, watching TV, they will develop in many ways even better.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, sort of, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.075 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50720835792 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5875 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.4990384473 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.333333333 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9166666667 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3550738609 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135514518929 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075235577444 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196960785689 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690506335635 0.056905535591 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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