Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by thier teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that students should be give homework to improve their knowledge better, while others support the idea that it is not necessary to have homework in children education. From my own perspective, I believe that children can obtain knowledge and success without being given homework.
To a certain extent, I agree that there are some advantages for fulfilling homework for students. First of all, school children are likely to assimilate school lessons more effectively by doing homework. For example, students will certainly revise their knowledge at school to complete homework successfully. In addition, not only are school children capable of fostering their knowledge but they also build an independent characteristic through self-study.
Despite the above arguments, I believe that children should be spent much time on leisure activities instead of homework. Indeed, in Vietnam, it usually takes at least 1 to 2 hours for students to fulfill homework entirely and about 7 hours to study at school. As a result, some school children might feel under pressure and boring in study, resulting in high drop-out rates. Additionally, another very good example here is that education system in Finland, where students are not given homework, regularly top international educational league tables.
In conclusion, although homework has some certain benefits for children to enhance their academic performance, I believe that the drawbacks outweigh these advantages in the long term.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...eigh these advantages in the long term.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, while, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55021834061 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86919834714 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64192139738 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7641098992 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.545454545 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376885681742 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145893715291 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753978709733 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236588343787 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080002140151 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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