Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people believe that government should not require families sanding children to learn in private schools to pay taxes. From my own perspective, I totally disagree with the idea and I believe that parents should be under an obligation to pay taxes, even if their children studying in private education system.
There are several reasons why people might argue that they need not to pay taxes if their kids learn in private schools. First of all, mostly all finacial expenses in a private school is independent, which allows it not to be under controlled of government as a state one. By contrast, a part of taxes will be invested in public school in order to improve facilities or equipments for education. As a result, a student studying in private education system might pay tuition approximately twice or more than that in public schools, which is the key culprit of a controversy regarding taxes.
In spite of th above arguments, I support the view that although children are sent to private school, these families should be happy to share their money in order to assist public education system. One of the primary reason for this is that students who choose to study in public schools are usually intelligent but not enough financial condition to pursue private ones. Therefore, by supporting money for public education system through taxes, they are able to make a contribution to nurturing these kids. Additionally, it is beneficial for all members of society to have equal opportunities in education quality, which helps these students become a valuable citizen in the future. Besides that, choosing a school for children depends on determination of parents, family's income and interest, and they have to be responsible to their decision instead of blaming for tax.
In conclusion, despite sending children to private school, I believe that these families should pay taxes in a pleasant manner to aid students in public education system for the long-term benefits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'pay'?
Suggestion: pay
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Message: Consider replacing "in a pleasant manner" with adverb for "pleasant"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, regarding, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08923076923 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76426220937 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526153846154 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.1038711058 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.833333333 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0833333333 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382703196118 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147714756041 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080211467445 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25450060237 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487663269788 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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