Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
university or college is known as the common route to a successful career for almost of people who live in the globalization trend. Meanwhile, getting a job straight after school is not a bad choice for those who want to earn money to support their lives. In my opinion, I would argue that it is the best choice to go to university or college.
it is very important to note that academic qualifications are not only increasing our knowledge for applying in a future career but also achieve a high promotion position and salary. Besides, thanks to the university and college environment we could create and broaden our network relationship because we would meet a lot of professional people in the community. For instance, we could easily make friend with professors, friends who have the same profession to extend our knowledge.
By contrast, getting a job straight after school is not a bad decision. On the one hand, we could accumulate more experience while working. On the other hand, it would be the best choice for those who do not have enough money to afford tuition fees in university or college, we could earn money to support living expenses such as paying bills, food, accommodation, transportation fee.
In my opinion, I would highly recommend that getting a bachelor degree would help your life much easier because you could have a high salary with your professional skills.
In conclusion, both of decision getting a job after high school or going to college are depending on personal viewpoint and circumstances.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05426356589 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89597919728 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550387596899 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.051424406 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.545454545 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2257597608 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967154752651 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688630330137 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134626376383 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705241264574 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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