Some people believe that studying at university or colleige is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views.
After graduating from high school, youngsters have to choose between continuing to study further or finding a job. Some people are of the opinion that a dream career could only be achieve by university of college graduation, while others argue that getting straight to work is a better choice.
One the one hand, there are various reasons why a majority of people tend to persue higher education after school. Firstly, it is the fact that nowadays, university graduation is considered compulsory by many corporations. The job market is becoming more and more competitive, so if people don’t have a university degree, it is like that the will be excluded from many well-paid careers as teachers, lawyers and engineers, no matter how talented they are. Secondly, many people still cannot figure out what they really want to do, so entering universities might help us with this issue. People can have opportunities to study a variety of subjects and experience different kinds of jobs through their internship. As a consequence, they will find what is the most suitable option for them, as well as develop required skills to meet high-level qualifications.
On the other hand, working straight after school brings about certain benefits. To begin with, people who start earning money at a very young age have a tendency to be more independent. Their finance management skills will be developed significantly because they have to learn how to live on their own income. Furthermore, working without a university education can increase the number of manual workers, which is insufficient in many developed countries. It is necessary that there are people choosing to become plumbers or electricians, because many buildings cannot be constructed or simply renovated without people in those vocational careers.
In conclusion, it seems apparent that both attending a university or college and finding a career straight after graduation have their own outstanding advantages.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33546325879 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95252268321 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603833865815 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6297275555 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.285714286 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228333835078 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800089634189 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661834719227 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163066891635 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750073138836 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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