Some people believe that there should be the death penalty for extremely serious crimes. Others believe that it is not morally correct to kill criminals
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is often recommended that capital punishment be applied for extremely serious crimes while some people believe that killing criminals is morally wrong. The essay discusses both sides of this argument, and then I will give my own perspective.
On the one hand, there are many reasons why people support the death penalty for extremely serious crimes. First, the main reason for believing this is that execution is meant to act as an incentive to decrease the number of heinous crimes such as sex offenses and murder. Second, It is also possible to say that criminals will not learn anything if they are imprisoned for several years, thus these people must be hanged in order to limit the number of criminals on the planet. One good illustration of this is the Russian government imposes the death penalty for those who get indulged in terrible crimes like rape or murder, resulting in fewer criminal cases than in neighboring nations.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that in fact condemning criminals to death is essentially the same as committing another murder. People often have this opinion because they believe that taking another person's life, for whatever reason, is immoral. A second point is that any type of murder is opposed by many people of various religions. A particularly good example here is from the Bible, which mentions murder as one of the Ten Commandments that should not be broken.
In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. On balance, however, it seems that the death penalty should be used only in the most heinous of crimes. This is because of the reduction in crimes and that averting offenders would be more beneficial to citizens and society rather than the moral grounds.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ecause they believe that taking another persons life, for whatever reason, is immoral. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, then, thus, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93687707641 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5344025355 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564784053156 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.172063337 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.142857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406006736042 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121261886071 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843685971852 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24638009719 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950452365958 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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