Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Some people suggest that the circumstances of a crime and the reason for committing it should be taken into consideration when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some of us argue whether criminals must be subject to fixed punishment for certain type of criminals actions, or whether the situations and the motivation for a crime should be taken into account. This essay will discuss both views and outline my opinion on the given issue.
On the one hand criminal activities have reduced significantly in number over the history of a humankind with the incentives of some fixed punishment methods such as death penalty and life imprisonment for drug trafficking. Moreover, this factors deter many criminals of such heinous crimes as mentioned above. For example, in many Arabian countries for crimes like burglary there is a fixed punishment like hand amputation even regardless the stolen thing. That’s the mail reason why Arabian states are considered to have the lowest index of crime in the world.
On the other hand, to punish the criminals irrespective the incentives and the circumstances of the crime committed is also considered unfair to some extent. Furthermore, each occasion related to the crime is different from one another. For instance, the burglary of a little community shop and a bank theft should not be regarded on the same level of crimes. What is more, the intentional murdery should be judged severely and punished harshly than a murdery for self-defense purposes.
In conclusion, I opine that each type of criminal activities should be assessed specifically and by taking into consideration all the factors and motives of the crime committed by the offender. This will indeed lessen the number of criminals and also lead to a safe and trial balanced society. As a result I truly believe that these ideas are the essential considerations that can encounter the social justice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1514084507 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87055202613 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5521029464 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421142938171 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127486917026 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897527540644 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252136834496 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752815037049 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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