some people believe they should keep all they have earned and should not pay tax to the state Do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

some people believe they should keep all they have earned and should not pay tax to the state.Do you agree or disagree.

I disagree with the statement that individuals should not pay taxes to the state. The government runs the country from the taxes it collects.
Taxes are collected only from those who earn above a certain minimum limit. It is our moral duty to pay taxes.

Tax money collected by government is used to fund basic amenities, provide various services to citizens and for government administration
and projects,running of jails and defence system,and many other operations.It is not wrong to say that"taxes run a country."Thus,it is very
important for a government to make people pay taxes.

Let us analyze why people do not want to pay taxes. The main reason is their dissatisfaction with government in serving them. They blame
government for things like lack of infastructure,provetry and unemployment,but they are not completely wrong as tax revenue is misused in
some or the other way in every country.In developed countries, however, because of higher satisfaction from government's functioning,citizens
may be more willing to pay taxes. Another factor generating dissatisfaction is the tax structure it self. often the tax system is complex and it drives people
away from paying taxes. It is also felt that the rates are high and tax slabs are unequal. so they feel it is not unethical if one goes for tax avoidance or tax evasion.

Not paying taxes can drastically affect a country's revenue generation,my own country,India,for that matter.But then ,it is equally desired that government
come up with a fair tax structure and also make people aware where the taxes are being diverted.Even lowering the tax rates can help a country increase
its tax collection as it would increase compliance among the taxpayers.Tax reform should also be fast so that no public grievance or non-compliance remains for long.
A proper tax backed up eith strict tax laws can produce the best results.

Summing up ,I reiterate my opinion by saying that it is the duty of every citizen to pay tax and the duty of every government to use it appropriately in public interest.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20118343195 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42445109555 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550295857988 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 129.079751403 49.4020404114 261% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 117.2 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.38176352705 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236458165323 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907120379566 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069529186654 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884614453495 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549649946917 0.056905535591 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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