Some people believe today that everyone has a right to access to the Internet and that governments should provide this access for free. Other people believe that access to the internet is not a right and should be paid for like other services. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
People have different views on whether or not internet access should be free. I believe that individuals have to pay for internet services like other media, such as phone, televion and newspaper.
Before the introduction of the internet, people had no choice but to use phone for calling, newspaper and television for getting news about different events. However, modern life depends on the internet so that all activities are done over the internet, from making connections with social media, such as Skype, Meet and Imo to getting news from Instagram, Telegram and YouTube. In the past, people had to pay for phone calls and newspapers, so the question is that why some people believe that accessing the internet should be free. Like other all media, accessing to the internet is costly, from the storing the information to passing it to users.
If officials want to make it free, they must use the state budget which can be used for improvement of necessary public services, including road safety, construction of well-equipped hospitals and schools. The only benefit of public internet can be a warranty of equal access of all people to the internet. However, such an internet service not only is unreliable but also is slow especially when multiple users have access to the internet simultaneously. Additionally, in this condition some hackers can misuse the free internet to hack the information of users because of the weak condition of security in the virtual space. As a result, having the free internet is not reasonable.
In conclusion, in my view, people have to pay for using the internet, as the money raised can help governments to provide more facilities for keeping virtual space safe. Also, this money can be a good aid for the state budget for providing important public services.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
People have different views on whether or not internet access should be free. I belie...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oviding important public services.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05685618729 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74865117403 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528428093645 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.846974857 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.307692308 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43988336608 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179947181607 0.084324248473 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997867816135 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297210720509 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812487459193 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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