Some people believe that traveling is a valuable experience; others say it is a waste of time and money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Traveling is a valuable experience; others say it is a waste of time and money. Both reflect possitive and negative views
Travel broadens the mind. Visting other places give us other point of view, broaden our knowledge. For some people, it is the time for us to relax after a hard working work or stressful time happended. Moreover, we will learn more about cultural and historical values of our country or maybe other. By traveling alone, we may feel lonely but it will exceed our limits. Exploring new skills and getting time to remeber and thinking deeply.
In the other hand, some people say that it is a waste of time and money. For this year 2021, everyone is affected strongly by the epidemic. It is the time that people must think carefully and saving money so that traveling is not neccessary perhaps. Almost the tourist city has closed because the covid 19, villa or resort is the final choices and it also take the highest money it's okay for people who get high income but for the lower they may not get money for their life, how can they think about traveling.
In my point of view, traveling in an epidemic time is not necessary at all but I will save money from my works to start my trips soon because I need time to look back and relax. Everyone has their own choice, so do I. I choose this way to refresh my mind and get my work better
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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...ices and it also take the highest money its okay for people who get high income but...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43027888446 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21123792962 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577689243028 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.4438951572 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4285714286 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316191843995 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12634275637 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136824099596 0.0667982634062 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221614225765 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122252086981 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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