Some People believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children)
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
While others think that it is necessary for the school to require their learners to enroll in community services such as teaching sport to children, working for charity, and contributing to the development of city, some people believe oppositely. I personally believe community service programs are essential for the high school students. Therefore, high school principals must include it in their school curriculum.
To begin with, requiring learners to take part in the unpaid service for the community will develop their sense of sincerity as well as cares for their society. This is due to the fact, such programs including cleaning the street and rivers, helping orphans and elderly community as well as teaching football for the kids, were trained them to contribute to others without any intention to ask for the return. In fact, it enables them to express their feeling sincerely just for their community.
Secondly, enrolling in to the community service program will also shape the personality of the learners to become a problem-solver. Since the requirement to be aware of the community’s problems in which they can contribute before it was conducted, will undoubtedly play great role in the enhancement of their skill of how to come with appropriate solution or innovation to counter such issue. Hence, it goes without saying that such program will contributes to development of their personality.
To sump up, it is clear that the unpaid community program have considerable benefits for the enhancement of student’s sense of sincerity and cares as well as their problem-solving skills. Therefore, it is mandatory for the learners to be a part of such agenda.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'contribute'
Suggestion: contribute
...s without saying that such program will contributes to development of their personality. ...
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Line 7, column 267, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e learners to be a part of such agenda.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in fact, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28624535316 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03590268803 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516728624535 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1978967096 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.272727273 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296090468222 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134759685222 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977919761511 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200652979143 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116539888877 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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