Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Community service is a kind of volunteering jobs which modify societies in a good way. Most of the teenager experience this throughout their free time or in the summer. Some people believe this is not sufficient and it must be their extracurricular activities in the school while other acclaim they must do this based on their own will and without any obligation. Obligation encourages teenagers to don’t work completely whereas volunteering enthusiast them to work better and more.
Unpaid community service has many benefits for adolescents. They can know their strength and weakness during the work. Also, it should be noted that it prepares them for their future career, as it acts as internship. Getting familiar by various kind of works and environment is another benefit for them. For instance, youth who has experienced volunteering through their adolescence can get along with other better and has more critical thinking skills than other which help him to be more successful. Plus, by knowing their strength and weakness, they can choose their future career better.
Taking part at unpaid community services has also been shown to have one other, more tangible merits for societies. It can help them to identify societies problems which is not considered by other. When they grow up, they are not superficial about problems and issues. On the contrary, they can make big changes in the rules and principles to solve many issues in the society.
To wrap it up, I strongly agree that unpaid community services become compulsory part of high school programs, since it helps both society and person to reform. Apart from this, doing community service is a duty for every person who live in the society and it do not need any payment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 261, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'does'?
Suggestion: does
...y person who live in the society and it do not need any payment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, whereas, while, apart from, for instance, kind of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06920415225 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66839670815 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59169550173 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6636457238 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5625 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223516461046 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756997719674 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699841090457 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140013721695 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573239128321 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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