Some people believe that unpaid community services should be a compulsory part of high school programmes( for example working for a charity,improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is considered by some that voluntary services should be mandatory in secondary schools curriculum for growing morality, being co-operated to others as well as betterment for society, more importantly, for country. To my mind, I am convinced about that this services is crucial for every person to become a paragon personality.
To begin with, when toddlers involve plethora charity work, it increases their humanity. In other words, as a part of the society, we have numerous responsibility and if they relate with unpaid work, therefore, accelerate their moral values to help people. In addition, when child involve free work and they spend their hefty time in those activities, as well as study. As a result, involving in unethical activities and bad habits like addiction,playing excessive computer games also mitigating. For example, different school organize painting competition, where children's sell their own art, after that they are donating this amount to charity organizations. By this way, they learn to being human, create sacrificing mentality, which encourage them to do more work in the future.
Apart from this, voluntary activities also augment social bond. What I mean by this is that when anyone fall in trouble, they try to solve this problem without thinking any results. So that unknown people, similarly, relatives, neighbor also more connect with them, because of quality, dedication to co-operate others. To exemplify with, in medical college has blood donating organization, where some people donate blood willingly and sometimes involve n awareness programme, moreover, help by giving money and service. Thus, come from involvement in community services in childhood, which also create social popularity compared to others.
Besides that, child learn how to work under a team, hence, beneficial in the professional career. They take prompt decision as opposed to other colleagues and able to reach highest position, because of team commitment.
In conclusion, even though this types services kill large portion of time from our life, however this activities are important. This is because to survive in the society we need physical accommodations as well as mental satisfaction, which comes from doing voluntary work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, however, if, moreover, second, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for example, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50287356322 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90172834953 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635057471264 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 2.10420841683 475% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1344699455 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.647058824 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1176470588 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155931258325 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455259940816 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531663483512 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849480599457 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727763258609 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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