More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information. Therefore, there is no need for printed books, magazines and newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable that in the present day technology has revolutionized tremendously all over the world, where we completely rely on computers and technical devices not only for information but also in e-banking, e-services and online newspapers. However, because of this development, printed books, magazines, and papers are no longer appealing to people; I disagree with this opinion.
To begin with, although technology has been involved in our life dramatically, in some places where internet access is rare, and people love to read from books, magazines. Take Bangladesh as an example, where the newspaper is popular among the mass population to obtain information about the regional and international phenomenon. Besides that, technical failure and network issues are other reasons which distract people from reading on the computer and mobile phone. Therefore, if a student read important topics from devices before the exam and without any reason creates technical issues, it will hamper their smooth preparation.
Furthermore, informations are uploaded in the internet sometimes, these are not reliable and flexible, which confuse people about its transparency, and therefore mislead people in terms of crucial issues. For example, during the pandemic period of Covid, 19 myriads of websites disseminated data about this medical problem and also recommended medicines without any doctoral suggestion; consequently, vulnerable Populus suffered for these reasons. In the case of the book is published authentic data and before publishing it, the writer and publishing company review it several times and in addition, it is also updated from time to time.
In conclusion, I reiterate the point that despite technology is thriving our knowledge by conferring umpteen information, but printed books, periodicals and magazines are imperative to absorb reliable and flexible information.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Besides
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...h confuse people about its transperancy, and therefore mislead people in terms of...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77655677656 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26293244172 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648351648352 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.4722135471 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.222222222 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16209880525 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595767025428 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030367885721 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874054676063 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344969754182 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 15.65 50.2224549098 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.84 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.91 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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