once, children start school, teachers have more influence than parents on their intellectual and social development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Owing to the teachers for accelerating academic and social improvement in our youngsters lives more than their parents. In my opinion, mentors play as a catalyst in students life not only in subjective matters, but also in how to prove themselves as human beings with myriads humanitarian values.
To begin with, teachers are ubiquitous in every aspect of our life. This is because, for centuries parents without any doubt rely on teachers for the betterment of their adolescents. After completing 6 years we send our future generation to school and until graduation, they will spend a hefty portion of time with their teachers in the school or college. So they tremendously impact in thriving their knowledge as well as social aspects. On top of that, some educational institutions have offered daycare centres and hostels, where the progeny can stay and monitor by teachers 24 hours. For instance, due to service parents busy in their life and keep unattended in the home in front of the pervasive media or the television, which would e negative for younger one, therefore teachers imperative for our children.
Furthermore, all and sundry shows respect and consider as role models instead of guardians. It has happened with maximum families where babies listen to teachers instruction rather than their parents. Apart from that during the class period, they have also arranged excursions and extra-curriculum activities, which conferring teachers to find hidden talents and pursue their potentials in umpteen of lucrative choices. As a result, our country gets responsible and successful generation. If teachers are significant for yielding children's future, peers will also look forward to it.
In conclusion, although parents might be shaped juveniles minds, however, teachers role is more crucial in taking a decisive decision about academic and social career, and boosting their confidence, maturity in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37333333333 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8617709561 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653333333333 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6320250701 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.142857143 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2857142857 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212383648337 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699124335252 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489564940345 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124503360757 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259926205347 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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