Nowadays,more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face.Is this a positive or negative development.
In present situation people prefer to communicate with other through internet compare to personal conversation.In my opinion, this is a positive development by which people can update himself by express their views,ideas and interact easily with family members and friends.
One important benefit is that due to competitive situation people live all over the world by using internet it increases social bond. What i mean by this is that for education,employment and other social reason members from one family live different places but through Facebook,Instagram they can easily talk,see each other via video conference which not disconnect them. Even though they situated remote location,they can celebrate public functions as well as personal celebration like birthday,weeding ceremony and easily wish themselves.Not only interact within family but also they can broaden their global knowledge and express views,customs of own country which also helps in representing own culture in international platform.For example,when university or other international organizations organize different program like independence day at that time people in different countries represent themselves.
Another beneficiary issue is easy access or use of technological advancement.In other words,when any new invention or research published people can informed by online within a minute.More importantly,students get opportunities to take part in distance learning as well as online coaching through Internets whats app group,you tubes etc.
In conclusion,i think that to get information,socialize with nearest and dearest ones and develop anybody's view internet is progressive development of 21st century.
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| 2019-05-24 | lamina jahan | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example, i mean, i think, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.09166666667 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.66044927419 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658333333333 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.578524555 49.4020404114 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 243.666666667 106.682146367 228% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.0 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.5 7.06120827912 262% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0935322699833 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498793938538 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338679391613 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0557987157512 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356226090742 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.3 13.0946893788 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.5 50.2224549098 11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.63 12.4159519038 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.08 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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