Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is nit important because life will be easier if their are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Languages disappear from our world and it is happened every year. According to some, this is beneficial for society, this is because if we have uniform language, so that communication become more easier than before. However, I am not agree with this view, after considering broader perspective of this situation.
To commence with, language play inevitable role in cultural dimension. As if, this demolish means destruction of whole nation, their values, traditions, more importantly, there is no existence of own acquaintances. Take it for example, to get Bengali language, we devoted our blood and acquire this. After a decade if it die out,what will happen in the future, as a citizen of Bangladesh we can not imagine. This is because, language disappear means identity of a nation, their history, values also vanish and anyone survive, therefore, have to pay for this by adopting new language, hence, impede to get human rights properly. For example, because of disappearance some African nations bound to adapt English or Spanish language, which affect their pride, imperial history, although they do not want this purposely.
In addition, because language globally impact on economics, specially tourism industry and education sector. What I mean by this is that, every year hefty portion of people visit different countries to know others culture, tradition etc. When whole world have uniform language, they do not feel redundant specialty to explore the country. This is because, when language become identical, after few years, food habit, iconic trend, art, music will be similar. So why people waste their time and money behind this, furthermore, reduce travelling, impact on tourism earnings, but also larger percent of people become unemployed, who particularly rely on tourism. Apart from this, every year huge archaeological evidence discover by scientist, similarly, further study like PhD or other sought also stopped. Students pursue higher degree to analyzing languages, unless, from where they obtain new knowledge or innovate new language.
In conclusion, I am strongly disagree with this view. Having combine language is not beneficial for our existence,we have to work on keeping minor languages, to retain viable our culture, economy and education, otherwise, in the future may be whole world disappear.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: easier
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, similarly, so, therefore, apart from, for example, i mean, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45580110497 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79024259532 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635359116022 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 2.10420841683 523% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7772715742 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.722222222 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336717205123 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104061849414 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455773160235 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209023297456 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534335247184 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.